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Teen Poetry #8

My broken Heart

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-04-06 12:43 PM

I think your silence is gonna drive me insane,
I'm so sick and tired of all this pain,
how was I to know i'd fall so hard for you,
I swore to myself thats the last thing i'd do,

but here i am sitting alone in tears,
and theres no one to help calm my fears,
all I do is think of you and me,
it kills to know you're driving me to insanity,

but still i wait for you each day to call,
and I hurt so bad when you don't call at all,
I know deep inside it's time to let you go,
but if you cared at all you would of let me know,

out love could never last from the start,
now I'm left alone with a broken heart.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2007-04-06 01:00 AM

Well done another great poem... congrats great write.. The pain gets easier, and the heart will heal but until then its so much easier to cry than to be angry

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2007-04-06 06:50 PM

i loved this one too. it flowed nice and had alot of feeling.

um_idk
Junior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 32
minnesota

3 posted 2007-04-07 12:55 PM

i really liked this i could kinda relate to it right now

Sad_eyed_girl
New Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 8

4 posted 2007-06-04 12:48 PM

you may think of as a bad thing now but just think in the future another one will come along that u really care for and if u never let this one go how could u find someone who really cares about u? you may not now but one day u will be thankful for letting this one slip away!!!!1

Tinsel
Junior Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 36
UK

5 posted 2007-06-04 02:31 PM

I could totally relate to that poem... it's really good!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2007-06-05 01:00 AM

Wow thanks a lot y'all...
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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