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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-04-04 07:19 PM


Tie the tube,
And close your eyes.
10 cc's of what you need
Will put you out tonight.

You keep yourself closed off,
By hiding behind those doors.
The seringe is in the next room,
While you still fiend for more.

Trust me,
I know how hard it is to stop,
When the cravings dont subside.
Convuling on the bathroom floor,
You've done too much this time.

I wish i could have helped you,
Because i was just like you.
I was the one having all the fun,
But do you want to know the truth?

Its not worth the effort or the money,
Just for your slow suiside.
Because every time you grab the needle,
It takes away your life.

Ive been there before,
I know how i know how it feels.
I wish i could have been there,
I could have helped you deal.

I cant change the past,
So just take my advice.
Stay away from drugs,
They take away your life.

© Copyright 2007 Bryan Lucas - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2007-04-06 12:10 PM


I liked this alot and its so true.. every inch of it is true.. Well done.. Great Job

♥Jessica ♥

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
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2 posted 2007-04-06 12:34 PM


I like this, really descriptive full of emotion...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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