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0 posted 2007-04-03 09:27 PM



Could you turn the music up a bit?
I wanna feel it in my fingertips
The rhythm moving through my hips
I wanna hear that brand new hit


Drop it down low
Drop it down low
Betcha didn’t know I could touch the flo’
Drop it down low
Can ya, Can ya,
Drop it down low

I need ta feel the bass up through my shoes
Watch me- Look now- when I move
Can you feel this
Can you see the lyrics on my lips?

The beat is so enticing
Your lips so inviting
This music put a spell on me
So come a little closer
Watch me as I drop it lower…

Listen….

   The beat’s down low
   Can you drop it to the flo’
    Can you feel it?
    Come on let’s go
     Can you feel it?
        Drop
              It
                Down
                    Low

Drop it down low
Drop it down low
Watch my body touch da flo’
Betcha didn’t know I could drop it this low.
Can you make your body touch the flo’

Drop it down low
I said drop it down low

© Copyright 2007 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-04-04 12:49 PM


I liked this, I could feel the beat
hunnie

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2 posted 2007-04-04 10:45 AM


this is seriously very good...
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3 posted 2007-04-04 11:41 AM



This is an amazing piece, I mean, really amazing! I loved it

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