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0 posted 2007-03-26 10:05 PM



Hey baby, I’ve got something to tell you
So come,
Come
Dance with me

I know it’s a slow song
I know you don’t know it
But I’ll sing along and you’ll soon catch on

I need to tell you something
I need for it to be okay
I need you to let me in
Your heart

I need you to tell me
What you feel for me
Is it what I
Hope it could be?

Would you love me
If you had the chance?
Baby now’s the time
you’ve got me in a trance


Baby you’ve got something to tell
So I’ll come dance with you

Yeah, it’s a slow song and you know it too
And we’ll sing along to the words

You say
It’ll be okay
I’m listening
What else will you say?

You say you’d love me if you had the chance
you suddenly stop us in mid-sway
Then you slowly –oh I’ll never forget this day-
You slowly lean in
And stop my heart
You lean in and
Fireworks start

You say you’ll love me if I give you the chance
There’s no one here now
But lets dance one more dance…

© Copyright 2007 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
shannonbaker
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 12

1 posted 2007-03-28 05:52 PM


This was a really cute poem, It sounds like it could be a song. I really liked it.
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2 posted 2007-03-31 03:23 PM


this was really cute i liked it
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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