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Teen Poetry #8

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pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-03-15 09:13 PM

You’ll never control me
Not now and never
You can just say goodbye
To ‘Always and Forever’
It’s a pretty little sentiment
But I’m just not that into it

I’m my own person
You could be your own too
But as long as you’re around her
She’ll continue to change you
I’m sorry I’m not the kinda girl
That’ll follow you around
I stand on my own
I hold my own ground

You’ll never control me
Not now and never
You can just say goodbye
To ‘Always and Forever’
It’s a pretty little sentiment
But I’m just not that into it

I’m so so so not sorry to say this
It’s your decision
Better make the right choice
Once it’s made
You can Never Ever Ever
Go Back to Eden

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

1 posted 2007-03-15 11:19 PM

YES! I love it! Very true and the strength shows and it's got amazing flow. It made me feel very able to say "Go to heck" to somebody who needs to be told...but EXCELLENT write, I adore it!

chiLanta
Junior Member

since 2006-12-01

Posts 47

2 posted 2007-03-21 07:05 PM

i enjoyed this good write and so tru

pencil&paper
Member

since 2006-09-09

Posts 76
asleep somewhere in my head

3 posted 2007-03-29 08:05 PM

love love LOVED it it's probably my favorite poem by you

LOVED IT!!!!!!!

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

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