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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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I'll never say I'm sorry I'll never take it back I know I'm gonna win Because friendship's what you lack. i'm wondering how you could be so dumb To want to live in a world that isn't real Why would you want people to tell you they love you And then stab you in the back And date boys who only look for sex appeal? You think you have it all Someday you'll realize that you're wrong You'll be working some crummy job While the radio is playing my song [This message has been edited by pen&paper (03-16-2007 10:16 PM).] |
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Reba Burt New Member
since 2007-05-31
Posts 9Indiana |
im not sure if you want title sugfgestions but i think that a good title would be surreal world I love you all |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
really liked the flow in this poem good subject as well. And perfect length. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
it was an okay poem i don't believe it was your best poem in my opinion but it had a good point |
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