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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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the idea of love For me- seems just absurd I'm always too afraid That someday I'll get hurt It seems as though a dream That i once had but have forgotten Telling me that this thing called love is never to be begotten I so desperately want to find it but its hinding from me What am I supposed to do When it seems like no one loves me? [This message has been edited by pen&paper (03-16-2007 10:15 PM).] |
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chiLanta Junior Member
since 2006-12-01
Posts 47 |
i know the feeling but just know love will find you when you aint looking for it |
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shannonbaker Junior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 12 |
This poem is very relatable to everyone I think. |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
the idea of love For me- seems just absurd I'm always too afraid That someday I'll get hurt (I can relate) Yes this poem most certainly is relatable to just about everyone. But with love nothing is EVER simple and you have to risk getting hurt because it can happen. There are people who love you that you probably don't even know love you! (Funny how that works) You can't just sit tight and wait for it though! You have to go a' lookin for it!! Lots of hugs and hershey bars! Kira ~Should the truth be so buried in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~ |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
i like the first stanza it's my favorite good poem  "Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet |
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