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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
A second of flying through the air. maybe I’ll never stop trying to Escape to who knows where. For a moment, I am who I am not. Peaceful soaring in the skies. Maybe I will never land. The Beginning of my life, Adrenaline rushes through my veins. Caress of her neck, my hands. I had and have a dream. That lives within rebirth. no one i must be. Balanced on her back, Ecstasy for what its worth. The blackened silhouette runs free. Her charcoal body carries me along side the wind. No one else exists but her and me. The glowing horse magnetically attracted to flight. Cantering to freedom, connected we are destined. Baladera, a name merged in destiny. A legend living beyond its time. Nightwalker brought to life through old prophecy. The remembered horse and rider that can merge united. This day the honor is hers and mine. To always be Reborn in the dying of stars. Bestowed upon the gift to shine. Our fate is to erase the memory of war. Charging into battle and standing on the field. A horse and rider, draw the line. Teaching the pained to be able to forget forever. When we ride away, we steal away the woes. Touching minds, so the forgotten can be remembered Dream raiders, haunting the dreams of the cold killers. Forced to regret their evil deeds, oh so slow. Mourning family members wail out in grief. In the dreams of the broken, guiding them to light. But its not our faces they want to see. Blood for blood isn’t justice; it’s an excuse to kill. Cantering through the waves of dawn, seeking in night. The night horse and the dream rider may be but a myth. Bringing an element of what is real delving behind the mist. Taking away the thought thsat ignorance’s is all bliss. We enter clockwork pattern that dreams all follow. Phantoms of the past, night horse, dream rider. If even they exist. |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
WHY did no one comment on this????  UGH this place has changed!! So this is a really good poem, I noticed a few places were a few things didn't quite ryhme, but I don't know if its meant to be all ryhming or not, because it sounds so good. Okay, so I'm done for tonight....Great job. I think guys need to quit on their ego....lolI think I am going to have to say this everytime I comment....I come in peace - Spirit x0x0 |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I have to agree with Free Spirit, why has nobody commented, yea i'm a little slack latley i know but this is the first night i've sat down and commented.. Its great and its wonderful to finally see the poem you have been promising me for so long.. Great Write ♥Jessica♥ |
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