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SiR3N
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since 2007-03-07
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0 posted 2007-03-08 01:08 AM


Below is a poem that I have written about the love of my life.
[u]Ideal love[/u]


Never could I find a girl more perfect than you
The love we share shall never fade or bid adieu
I try to muster words of how I feel, but to my dismay
You mean more to me than words can say

Alone I sleep lingering for you
Closed my eyes become, and you are all I see
Sensations of you flourish my minds eye
Wishing you were here to comfort me

WHen we are together my arms embrace you tight
They will never release, not once through the night
I lay awake next to you - knowing that you are mine
and such a thought sends chills down my spine

After this is over I just want you to know
In three simple words truth I will show
Aside from what I may utter or do
You will always know that
I love you


© Copyright 2007 Jarrod Newman - All Rights Reserved
Sphinxen
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since 2007-03-03
Posts 38
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1 posted 2007-03-08 03:56 PM


That was very sweet.
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2 posted 2007-03-08 11:44 PM


I thought this was sooo sweet too...
hunnie

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