navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #8 » not fair
Teen Poetry #8
Post A Reply Post New Topic not fair Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
chiLanta
Junior Member
since 2006-12-01
Posts 47


0 posted 2007-03-07 06:28 PM



I miss that smile that streched across a room
and that laugh that was so loud that everyone on the block could hear you
and your eyes that were like mine, not blue but dark brown
and the way we just were too

I miss the sleepovers and the talks
the tears we shed when we felt alone
knowing we weren't, but loneliness can be felt even with others around
thats why we knew we could always talk on the phone

I miss the way you could take the pain and smash it
and my heart could stop bleeding for the day
and the times we ditched school togeather
just to chill the day away

I miss the car rides, loud music, and blunts
The gas we wasted and the endless nights
and I miss those beer, and vodak bottles too
and the way the stars just seemed like nature's lights

i miss you i have wrote it before
but shuree its so hard without you
its not fair, i swear its just not fair
but for now all that helps is me knowing you miss me too


© Copyright 2007 chiLanta - All Rights Reserved
pen&paper
Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513

1 posted 2007-03-14 09:24 PM


this had a lot of emotion

good job
           Pen

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #8 » not fair

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary