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secreteyes
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since 2005-12-20
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Wisconsin, United States

0 posted 2007-03-07 03:17 PM



you said all day long believe me i love you
then this is what you put me through
how can i ever trust another man
how can i ever figure this out just want to understaind
what can i do to get you out of my mind
this answer i really need to find
i rub my lips just remembering our last kiss
can't stop thinking about all of this
how you used to put the hair behind my ears
and in your arms i'd have no fears
why did i do what i did why did i run
now it is hard to just have fun
i only think of your face your soft touch
god i miss you so much
i wish i would have been able to show you
i just don't know what to do
we have to talk again i can't just wave good bye
our love our life we can't just let this die
i have so much to tell you i wish you only knew
how strong my love truly is for you
i love you heart body and soul
please jessy i beg you
i just don't want to let you go
come back on last time at least so i can show
all the love i have for you i just need you to know


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nicole leigh
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since 2007-09-19
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Eau Clair Wisconson
1 posted 2007-10-09 02:44 PM


i like dis poem of urs

NIKKI  

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2 posted 2007-10-10 02:04 PM


I loved the emotion in this, and the flow. Hope to read more
Krysti

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