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secreteyes
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0 posted 2007-03-07 03:14 PM



the truth is that i'm scared
and i do not know why

the truth is that i'm sad
and scared to say goodbye

the truth is that i'm lonely
and sometimes want to die

the truth is that i hurt
and late at night i cry

the truth is that i love you
but i am way to shy

the truth is that i fear
some one will see inside

the truth is i have questions
that no one wants to see

the truth is i am scared
that someone might find me


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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-03-07 10:35 PM


I really love this I know exactly where this is coming from...
hunnie

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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
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2 posted 2007-03-08 04:01 PM


I like this. Short simple and relateable.. Nice work.. I can so relate
Belinda
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3 posted 2007-03-11 11:20 AM


Short and sweet. I liked this alot.

Belinda.*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

unholyjudgement
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since 2007-02-27
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Wherever my soul takes me next
4 posted 2007-03-14 08:59 AM


Short,
Simple,
& To the Point
Luved it thnx

My mind is like lightning
One brilliant flash and its gone

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