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River Of Tears
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0 posted 2007-03-05 09:29 AM


Untitled

I see you standing there,
Your hands interlocked
Your eyes always on each other
His hands always touching you,
Your hands always touching back.

Watching him stand there, his arms wrapped around you,
I just want to scream, "How could you do this to me?!"

By now your probably thinking I am talking about an ex,
Maybe even a boyfriend who has been caught in the act,
But no no no, it’s not what it seems.

You see, those two standing there, holding hands right in front of me,
They are supposed to be my best friends.
But that’s not what I see.
Would you call them my friends?
Well, I guess that all depends.
So tell me, in your life, have you ever seen such a sight?
Where your best friends could do this and think it’s all right?


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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-03-07 12:50 PM


ummm two best friends what is wrong with that. well if it's a guy and a girl.... I liked this poem, flow was a little choppy but nevertheless good...
hunnie

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River Of Tears
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2 posted 2007-03-07 09:51 AM


Whats wrong wiht 2 best friends for me, is that they didnt know each other before me and him were in sixth grade, and they date on and off, and everytime they break up I have to re-build the friendship between all of us.
River Of Tears
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3 posted 2007-03-07 07:09 PM


Bump!?
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4 posted 2007-03-07 10:40 PM


oh ok, umm sorry I was just asking I didn't mean to sound critical... I see where you are coming from...
hunnie

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River Of Tears
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5 posted 2007-03-08 03:20 PM


Its okay, I didnt mean to sound upset. Its no big deal. I just get a tad touchy about this situation, Sorry...
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