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Teen Poetry #8

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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-03-02 11:55 PM

You have a way of making me smile,
even if it's only for a little while,
each time I think about all you say,
my love for you grows day by day,

You make me wish you would hold me tight,
comfort me every dark and lonley night,
and if wishes ever did come true,
I wish you'd love me as I love you,

So maybe I don't know you so much at all,
but you were there, saved me from my fall,
i'm glad you gave me the change to see,
you really are someone special, especially to me.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

1 posted 2007-03-04 02:23 PM

aww sweet

chiLanta
Junior Member

since 2006-12-01

Posts 47

2 posted 2007-03-07 06:36 PM

girl that is sweet i like it

SiR3N
Junior Member

since 2007-03-07

Posts 16
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2007-03-08 11:30 PM

Nice poem. I especially enjoyed the second stanza.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-03-08 11:56 PM

thank you all for your replies.. I don't think I have to explain but this is about one of my friends...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

5 posted 2007-03-09 06:52 AM

Love it, of course, somebody very lucky to have a friend like you.

Paul.

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

6 posted 2007-03-25 09:18 PM

Lovely
Cause that's what it is.

~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

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