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bekahlekah45
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0 posted 2007-03-01 05:28 PM



in the midst of my life
i take a break
i sit back and write a poem
so i can fulfil a challenge
haha so here goes.

ummmm....

consternation all around
I stand in the back.
i make no sound.

-Great turmoil and distress-
I turn to the flag
i lay a hand across my chest

.........i had ideas then they all got lost. so thats like...1/4 of the poem i was gunna write. but at least i wrote anything! haha yay i fulfilled a challenge


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1 posted 2007-03-02 12:24 PM


YAY! a fufilled challenge,oh no that means I gotta write too ahhhhh, hmmm I liked this poem although very short, it had a nice flow...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

bekahlekah45
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2 posted 2007-03-04 10:55 PM


wow thanks! lol
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