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Teen Poetry #8

changing for you

forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2007-03-01 12:07 PM

     give me sign
     to tell me your there
     let me know
     of this make me aware

     i want to find it
     to see what it was
     that turned you away
     to what i am blinded

you tried what i wanted
just to be perfect
but what you became was
something much different

i love you i do
but what person is this
what have you turned into
but some one emotionless

     i wanted to be everything
     i wanted to matter
     you showed me all
     that made your life better

     but all of my efforts
     everything i did
     meant nothing to be worth it
     nothing that helped

be who you are
i liked you for that
just be full of life
dont put on an act

no one should change
for me to approve
why did you turn into
something abnormal and strange

     im sorry i love you
     i souldn't doubt
     will your forgive me
     i was thinking of myself

     give me a chance
     i'll stop this right now
     i wanted romance
     but not to turn out like this

....well...i just wrote this...and im not liking it so much, but tell me what you think...i dont relly get it...its like a conversation between a guy and a girl...

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-03-02 12:33 PM

be who you are
i liked you for that
just be full of life
dont put on an act~

I really like this... it was good and very understandable.
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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