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Teen Poetry #8

I miss you

chiLanta
Junior Member

since 2006-12-01

Posts 47

0 posted 2007-02-14 09:33 PM

I miss you
I really do
I need you
but You are so far away

Memories flood my mind
My heart is tired of missing a piece
Thoughts of what we use to be
Hurt worse then a damm punch

I miss you
Gosh why does it have to be this way
Life isn't what I use to dream of
Life is something I rather get rid of

because Without you there is no life
No life to lead at all
and The tears keep falling
Like a rainstorm in the fall

I miss you
Thats all thats left to say
because words aren't enough anymore
To express the things of yesterday

hollygal
Junior Member

since 2006-12-30

Posts 21
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2007-02-15 09:35 PM

I know how you feel. There are some people you just can't find the words to discribe the loss of. Poetry hels though

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2007-02-16 10:28 PM

Yes, it is true that there are many people out there who can't describe their loss, I can't for the oddest of reasons describe it either when I write. I admire you for being able to voice your feelings onto the page.

Thanks for sharing this piece

"The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away"
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