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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104
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hey everyone tell me wat you think l8er Looking at you with loving eyes I hope you see who I am inside I want to be with you and no one else You’ve captured my heart and made it melt Your not like him, I know its true You wouldn’t break my heart in two You always care and you always will For this is what makes me love you still I’m afraid to tell him the truth That he is nothing like you That you are the one I want to be with The one who’s sweet lips I dream to kiss I miss you each night as I close my eyes Wishing you were here, with me by my side I want you here every minute of everyday But I love you is all that I can say "in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop" |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I like this, i really can relate to this I know exactly how it feels, I like the structure of this poem and the flow worked well... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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