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WaterFairy103
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since 2006-05-31
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0 posted 2007-02-13 07:08 PM


Let me slam my bedroom door,
Let me kick the bed.
We both know you could calm me down,
Could get inside my head.
And I'll probably yell,
Say things I don't mean.
So do me a favor, sweetheart,
And tonight, just let me.

Now, I don't get mad very often,
I'm too even-tempered for that.
And as a result, people come to me,
With their problems and all that good jazz.
You know you could snap me out of it,
All you have to do is smile,
But, just for tonight,
I'd like you to let me be mad for a while.

Sometimes a girl needs
To throw an angry, horrible fit.
And rest assured that latter,
I'm gonna feel terrible for it.
But even when I feel that bad,
I'm also going to be all right.
So please, sweetheart,
Just let me be mad tonight.

Scars are Tattoos with Better Stories.

© Copyright 2007 Kelsey Dianne - All Rights Reserved
whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
Posts 146
Australia
1 posted 2007-02-13 08:15 PM


lol i liked it- library fairy, this is in my library.

Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness.

-Sir Gawain

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-02-14 08:26 PM


I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! I can easily relate to this, and the idea was something I know I wouldn't think of but you did an amazing job of this.
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
3 posted 2007-02-16 10:31 PM


Hi WaterFairy103,

Not my favorite of poems by you but it was an enjoyable read just the same. I know exactly where this is coming from when I experience these feelings in my own life.

Thanks for sharing, I'd love to read more of your poems in the future if you'd be so willing to share

"The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away"
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