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Kinky Little Nightmares
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Kinky Little Nightmares |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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I awake to a room that has no existence Broken bodies and souls that have died from resistance The smell of burnt flesh fills my nose from afar It’s then I realize a little girls trapped in a car Her body hangs from the mangled metal as blood drips from her ears The worst thing I have ever seen fills my eyes with tears All of sudden I hear an abrupt jolt It’s like I’m stuck on an island that has no fault A shadow appears from the distance afar She seems in control and wears a bright red bra For you to save her life, you must risk your own You must die this very moment so I can bury every bone The blood I drink must be pure It must be yours and you can’t find a cure I glare at her, as awful daggers pierce my skin She’s grabbing at my wrists as my anger explodes from within I knew I was done for, I couldn’t fight anymore I was cold and shaking, I was scared to the core All of a sudden she disappeared into the darkest of night And that little girl started breathing and she screamed out in fright I tried to pull her from the car but is was to late The car exploded in flames, I had taken the bait That little girl screamed in pain The smell got stronger and I grew insane It wasn’t long after that the smoke had faded away I saw her body hanging, and it swayed a rhythmic sway I walked towards the edge of the non-existent island Hoping I could soon bury myself in the sand I didn’t find any gold sand, what I found instead Was burning hot coals and a four poster bed I shook, as I lay tired and cold My body was aching but I couldn’t be told I got up from the bed and lay on the ground My flesh burned into the atmosphere while I sat making no sound I had been just another word in the devils deadly book My blood and my heart was all she took The alarm is heard and I wake up Beside my bed is orange juice placed in a cup And 2 weetbix crushed with sugar and cream It was then I realized this had all been a dream A nightmare that would occur again when I fall asleep Those kinky little nightmares that make my heart weep |
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fanatic-flyer Junior Member
since 2007-02-07
Posts 26Bournemouth |
different...but interesting to read Thanks for everything, because everything makes the world happy =) |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Yea i thought so too.. Something entirely different for me to write.. but something alot more imaginative.. lol.. now i don't make sense! |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Very, very different from what I've seen you write before but in some ways so much better for being different! I loved the ending of this poem, I think it's the last two stanzas that I find to be my favorites. The dream sequence is a little to jumbled up for me, that could be your intent because dreams often do not make any sense but still... Good write, I always enjoy reading your poems and I hope that I will see more like this one in the near future  "The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away" |
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Quisha' New Member
since 2007-02-17
Posts 4 |
your poem was nothing short of amazing...i mean, you had me on the edge of my seat!!! keep doing what you do cause that poem of yours was the truth!!! |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
interesting but I didn't get the flow of the dream sequence? |
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nick_lyss Member
since 2006-08-21
Posts 88 |
very very interesting. i really liked it. |
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