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STOP_JUDGiiN_M3
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0 posted 2007-02-09 09:47 AM




Letter to Mommy from daughter...
Dear You,
      I just had a few words to tell before I let you go,
Do you know what you are putting me through day in and day out??
You have left me stuck with one to many doubts,
You swear you know what I am about,
But I don’t care, because now I feel I am left without,
You weren’t there during my most memorable years of my life,
Now you constantly reminding me, telling me every time you get a chance,
You was a mistake,
I never wanted you, and show in the hell don’t love you,
But yet I still want to be by your side,
To full this empty piece of me inside,
But I don’t understand why out of all your kids, I was the one pushed aside,
I can’t take this from you a day longer, you are starting to mess with my pride,
All you thinking about is your self and that’s not fair,
Now that I have hit the double digits, I started not to care,
But yet and still I even drown myself in these unwanted tears,
This is all so new, but also so past due,
This is all I got to say, I am sick of the drama you putting me through,
From this day forward, I am so over you,
And your drama too!!!!!!
                                                                Sincerely,
                      Me!



FTR...ALLDAii!!

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1 posted 2007-02-09 11:21 PM


A lot of emotion showed in this poem, I thought it was really sad...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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