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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
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0 posted 2007-02-04 07:52 PM


With all the fairytale writing going on in here.. i couldn't help but add my two cents worth.. lol.. Anyway here goes..


Don't Corrupt Our Fairytales

Don’t corrupt my innocence and don’t listen to me cry
Don’t wait around for miracles when you know pigs will never fly
Fairytales are not mythical they never were you see
You can’t make them disappear because they should be real to you and me

Don’t say there is no such thing as a happy ending
It takes some time to find a heart that is slowly mending
God will only give us as much pain we can handle
You may think it’s the end for you but you just need to take a gamble
Take a gamble on your everyday life
Get married and be a man’s lucky wife
Go holidaying in Fiji or Christmas Island’s too
You never know you might end up owning a petting zoo
You could be a millionaire or a homeless man at sea
But we all live fairytale lives and I’m happy to be me

Live the life you want to live and find your happy ending
Don’t go around corrupting fairytales when lies are all you’re sending
Your castle is the place where you will feel complete
Your prince is the man that sits with you and gently rubs your feet
We all live in fairytales that why we must believe
Because fairytales are the only bit of magic in life we do receive…

© Copyright 2007 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved
whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
Posts 146
Australia
1 posted 2007-02-04 08:13 PM


beautiful- i loved these lines especailly

"Your castle is the place where you will feel complete
Your prince is the man that sits with you and gently rubs your feet
We all live in fairytales that why we must believe
Because fairytales are the only bit of magic in life we do receive…"

magic. it made the ending tear worthy.

you go Aussie! you rock my socks! (isn't that so american? i picked it up from an american friend and thought it so cute!)

Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness.

-Sir Gawain

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
2 posted 2007-02-04 10:39 PM


LOL... I actually liked it myself..i know im weird to like my own work.. Us Aussie know how to stick it and we stick it well.. IT WAT WE'RE  GOOD AT...

whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
Posts 146
Australia
3 posted 2007-02-05 09:07 AM


woot!

Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness.

-Sir Gawain

chiLanta
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since 2006-12-01
Posts 47

4 posted 2007-02-05 11:21 AM


this poem is oh so tru, good write i like it
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