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whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
Posts 146
Australia

0 posted 2007-02-04 03:01 PM



It is an awful thing to be by one’s self
A heart wrenching thing- without a doubt
I find myself along in a bustling crowd
A strange fact of which I’m not proud

I laughed once at this silly trifling thing
Then I did not know the pain it would bring
A sense of space with no time nor race
An awful sentence I have come to face

My actions that make me advanced in my thought
Are the ones that bring me this loneliness unsought
Ignoration (though it isn’t a word) hurts my heart
And I feel as if I am not worthy of this attentive part

I feel selfish in wanting what I should be giving
But wherein do I give when I cannot be getting
But as always, it seemingly comes down to this thing
Upon my own self, misfortunes I erroneously bring

Though I know not how I am guessing
That I make my self a miserable being

Love is never foolish- and if it is, it is a Divine Foolishness.

-Sir Gawain

© Copyright 2007 Whittney Larraine Lovely - All Rights Reserved
chiLanta
Junior Member
since 2006-12-01
Posts 47

1 posted 2007-02-04 03:27 PM


i feel where you are comming from, cause i feel the same way at times
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