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buttercupbaby
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0 posted 2007-02-03 11:51 AM



Marisa F.
February 3, 2007
--HeRo--
___________________
i will be your strength
lift you up off the ground
i will be your hero
when no one else is around

i will be your sunshine
on a dark and cloudy day
i will be the moon
when clouds come and block its way

i will be your smile
when you lack one of your own
i will take all of your pain
and make it my own

i will be your warmth
when outside the world is frozen white
and i will be there to hold you
through the long, cold night

i will be your keeper
if you can't keep yourself
and i will watch over you
like that little angel sitting on your shelf

i promise you i will keep you safe,
i won't let harm come to you,
i will be your hero
no matter what you do.


~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

[This message has been edited by buttercupbaby (02-04-2007 12:34 PM).]

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1 posted 2007-02-03 08:28 PM


~and my it my own~

I think this was supossed to be and make it my own. I liked this it flowed nicely and had a nice kinda hopefulness in it...
hunnie

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buttercupbaby
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2 posted 2007-02-04 12:35 PM


haha you are quite right! WOOPS! i fixed it..that was definetely my mistake:]

thanks hunnie!!

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

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