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Circle of life
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poemqueen Junior Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 26 |
Circle Of Life One life ends but another one begins A flower wilts but another blooms Many go hungry and many feast Some have none and some have plenty Poverty stricken and greed stricken No homes or lavish luxury This IS the circle of life! |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
i liked this but I think you should swtich "Poverty stricken and grief stricken" with "poverty stricken and grief unleashed" |
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