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Teen Poetry #8

Valentine?

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-01-27 05:52 PM

I wanna see you soon
But I don’t know if you feel the same
I’m not sure what to do
I’ve never played this game

I won’t ruin my chances
I won’t be too subtle
Too obvious
Or look too plain
All would ruin my chances
Of winning this game

I have to know,
Is it your heart at stake…
Or mine?
What I’m tryin’ to say is:
Nick,

Will you be my Valentine?

[This message has been edited by pen&paper (01-27-2007 06:25 PM).]

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

1 posted 2007-01-27 06:08 PM

I love this! I love the uncertainty, and then the determination, and it's just amazing! Fantastic job!

Dance like nobody's watching,
Love like you've never been hurt,
Sing like nobody's listening,
and Live like it's heaven on Earth.

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

2 posted 2007-01-27 06:15 PM

thank you!!!!

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-01-27 09:16 PM

this was cute, sweet I liked it 'cos of that...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

poemqueen
Junior Member

since 2006-12-06

Posts 26

4 posted 2007-01-29 04:42 PM

aww

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

5 posted 2008-02-14 03:45 PM

this one was written for my friend

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