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Teen Poetry #8
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buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03
Posts 400
outside in the rain

0 posted 2007-01-24 02:46 AM



im crying my eyes out
know its for you
the funny thing is
i dont even know that i care, and you say you do.

you say you are my best friend
but i know that you really aren't
and now im the one feeling bad,
because i ruined whatever friendship between started, its burnt

like fire making green grass dissapear
and replacing it with brown
i started a fight because i was hurt
and i know in my heart i let you, and myself, down.

im not the type that really cares
i just sorta let things fly
i might say i love you but in my heart
i know what im speaking is a lie

i was hurt once, no twice, before
so now whenever i trust
i give up on the person dearest my heart
i cant let someone else make my heart bust

i know that you mean well
yet in my mind and soul i know...
even if i know that you're kind
i have to let you go.

sorry im kinda confused/hurt right now..i just had a really big fight with someone, but this is how i am, i dont trust easily..i know its not the best, but i have a hard time describing things truly important to me WHILE they're happening..

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rhia_5779
Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
1 posted 2007-01-24 09:57 AM


I know (what) I'm speaking  a lie

IF you ever need to talk you can email me... Italiagirl12@gmail.com

forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 178
where my heart is
2 posted 2007-01-25 10:20 AM


really nice poem, and same for me, if you ever need to talk, im here! = )
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