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RevengeIsMine
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0 posted 2007-01-15 05:25 AM



Flying Without Wings....

Have you ever felt that you’re flying without wings?
Sailing gracefully across the ocean away from all those things
The things that make you stressed, upset and sad
The reason why you’re going insane is because life treats you bad.
But a young white horse, he finds you in his sight
You climb on his back and ride bareback through the night
You’re free from the world and all its pathological lies
Your life remains here in these stallions deep blue eyes
Across the beach you gallop together, the waves crashing against the shore
He understands you’re hurting and he knows you can’t fight another war
His stride builds your life to an exhilarating halt
Nothing can hurt you now not even a dancing lightning bolt
The sky opens up and the rain comes crashing to the ground
You hold on tightly not making a sound
The world can’t hurt you anymore your safe from harm
You infatuated with this snow white horse, your in love with his charm
You’re flying without wings he will keep you safe from hurt
So come ride bareback with me tonight as we gallop across the dirt…

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pen&paper
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1 posted 2007-01-15 09:47 AM


This was great! muy bueno! THe last line was my favourite. goin in my library
hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-01-15 11:29 PM


I really wish life were like that... but happiness haha it's not here... I liked this Jessica.
hunnie

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rhia_5779
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3 posted 2007-01-16 02:35 PM


Loved horse Idea but I love most horse ideas. and I'm ticked cause they are selling my horse back home(well he isnt legally mine but no one can ride him back hom after I left and my instructor left except for the adults who I guess can't either.

Nice though

I will prob post something soon about my horse. still thinking

RevengeIsMine
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4 posted 2007-01-16 07:31 PM


Riha.. Thats no good to hear.. I just got a new horse so i guess I'm making up for your lost one...

rhia_5779
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5 posted 2007-01-20 12:55 PM


They sold him for health problems which I found out just as my parents agreed to buy him for me, because they knew how much I loved him. But i get a horse when I come home from italy. so Im ok.. Maybe Ill find a horse half as special
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