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Renegade
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since 2006-10-21
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0 posted 2007-01-13 09:31 PM


I dont see my life
like im supposed to
I cannot run away
like i want to

because my innocence
never was
why seconds are tense
is because

I can't look at you
without the feeling
you feel it too?
are you concealing?

Why am i this way?
what is wrong with me
What can i say?
To those who can't see

It's not you its me
Who shouldn't be this way
This, the last time we'll see
Because I am going away

[This message has been edited by Renegade (01-13-2007 11:28 PM).]

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Colorado
1 posted 2007-01-14 05:03 PM


wow. very nice. i hope every things better. some times its better just to leave. idk if thats the case here but its still a good poem.

Jessica

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