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Fake Foolery |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
Words are deep and cut beyond comprehension You never seem to notice that you gouge me intensely Going days without a smile, days without relief of you Every moment now blending into another of pure hell Pretending to walk over me hurts more than the action A friend one moment, then you go after you’re appeased Stop bewildering my mind, be there or go away from me So make your choice, show me that you’re really real So you’re the fakest man in the world, now I finally see So that’s it? You don’t even know who you’re supposed to be The real you no longer exists, wrapped in an unbreakable shell I guess your cover has become the you that you never wanted to be I would have felt sorry for you; I would have cried a tear or two But the things you’ve done can’t be erased by cold salt tears Nothing but time can dull the pain that will never leave me alone You smile another fake smile at a poor restless nonsensical girl I would have felt for her too- but what the idiot wanted was stupid you So I cry warm tears I taste on my lips for my self for the way I was fooled "Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it everyday." Noelle - age 7 |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
poor restless nonsensical silly girl Try taking out silly cause that and nonsensical mean similar things and it sounds better with just nonsensical |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
thanks will do i knew it was too mcuh guess i just needed to hear it "Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it |
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