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0 posted 2007-01-12 03:13 PM



Possible


Do I still love you?

Is it Possible

For you?

No way.

But for me,

It’s Possible.

Are you still my reason

For Living?

Or are you just an excuse

To be upset

To feel not left behind?

Should I tell you

Now

Or should I wait?

Can I escape

From all this confusion?

Or should I stay-

And do what-

Wait?

I’ve done too much of that.

But-

Is it Possible that I still love you

Is it Possible that you might love me too?

© Copyright 2007 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
whitelielovely
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1 posted 2007-01-13 01:16 PM


impossible things are happening every day. so it's possiblee, it's possible, it's poosible for impossible things to happen every day.

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

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2 posted 2007-01-13 02:16 PM


gracias!
Renegade
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3 posted 2007-01-13 09:33 PM


nice
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4 posted 2007-01-14 05:00 PM



did u want it to be read by a breath every line? if so it sounds good, except for a few lines in the middle i thought could have been spaced differently. i don't know. that part just didn't sould correct to me.

Jessica

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