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alecs36 New Member
since 2007-01-09
Posts 1 |
Saddened by my stupidity I'll be sure to solve with reason as it wasn't my fault was it? these cards were laid against me. oh my, may your face haunt me in every return, oh my, is sorry to late in the day? why have i clenched my fist, held my breath, caught my step, oh my, why have i? Don't waste your time, no please who knows if he'll ever come around emotions bottled up, almost bursting it's time to look up, instead of down saddened by my stupidity it'll be surely solved with reason as it wasn't my fault, was it? i swear these cards were laid against me. -something to start with. New to poetry. |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
welcome to PIP hi i'm Lovely. if it's your first it's a pretty good start from what i see. not that i'm the end all be all. lol. but nice to see a new face. -Lovely |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi alecs36, Welcome to the teen forum of piptalk! It's awesome seeing all the new faces around here and nice to read your poetry. For being new to poetry I think you did a good job. Much better I should say then my first poem posted in the forums. I can't wait to read some more of your work and hope you'll continue to post  "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
yea I agree my first post was awful and well... awful. hehe Welcome to Passions  hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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