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whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
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Australia

0 posted 2007-01-08 08:28 PM


Can you read me anymore?
Can you tell?
I’m and standing by the door
You looked when I fell

It hurts to know
You don’t love me anymore
It hurts to know
In a heartbeat you’d let me go
I’m senseless
Because I choose to be
I’m senseless
Because you let me
down

Are you really mad?
Or are we just playing games?
It’s not fun anymore
Because of the pains

I’ve been bending backwards
All my live long life
I think I’m just now breaking
It’s almost nice

It hurts to know
You don’t love me anymore
It hurts to know
In a heartbeat you’d let me go
I’m senseless
Because I choose to be
I’m senseless
Because you let me
down

I’m down now, all the spinning plates
Are falling all around me

It hurts to know
You don’t love me anymore
It hurts to know
In a heartbeat you’d let me go
I’m senseless
Because I choose to be
I’m senseless
Because you let me
down


"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

© Copyright 2007 Whittney Larraine Lovely - All Rights Reserved
pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
Posts 513

1 posted 2007-01-13 09:13 AM


I really liked this

i especially liked the bit about the spinning plates

good write.

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