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whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
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Australia

0 posted 2007-01-04 05:17 PM



Caught once again between the two of you guys
One across and one besides me, where fun lies
You’re having too much fun playing with my hair
Making my hair like “Princess Leia’s”- we have no care

Our hands touch as I untangle your twirling hands
I hold them longer as I playing-ly scold your plans
You smile and twirl my hair again, an odd sensation
We’re all there, with no bickering- what an occasion!

Our teacher scolds us- and I shut her up, this is our time
You smile knowing what I’ve done, the other guy whines
Today is a good day; we’ve had lots of smiles and amusement
Being with both of you still gives me a little bit of confusement

We are all talking now- my hair’s a complete mess from their play
The one across smiles and in doing so has completely made my day

© Copyright 2007 Whittney Larraine Lovely - All Rights Reserved
pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
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1 posted 2007-01-13 09:15 AM


THis was good too. Not as good as some of you others but good still
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