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Your Angel
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Your Angel |
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River Of Tears Junior Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 25Canada! |
Okay, I am gonig ot explain it now to you. My sister had a horse Named Angel, the horse got really sick one night and was sick and got worse and worse for like 8 hours, that horse died, and it really hit our family hard, so I worte this as if it were the horse talking to my sister  I know - I am weird.Your Angel Think of me as your angel, The one who keeps you safe each day. You can call my name while you sleep, You can picture me your comfort while you weep. Never let those thoughts of me leave your mind. Don’t think of me as something you lost, But as a hope that was thrust upon you, A hope for all other days, a shoulder to lean on, And a friend to believe in. One you will always want and need. An angel that will always keep you safe, That will always want you to be happy, The one that will remember you, And think of you each second of every hour. When things start to look bad, Think of me, and know I am watching over you. That I still love you and will never leave you, I will always be in your heart, in that spot where you keep me so close. I will always and forever be your angel. - ShayLee N I am me, And always will be, If you think you can change me, Take a better look cause, I am happy as me! |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
No, you're not weird and thids was a beautiful poem. loved it. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
AHH thats sad he horse died.. THat sux.. I love horses and ride and this summer lived at the stables so I know how it is to lose a horse you loved.. REcently though not completely the same but I am going bac.. but I moved to italy and the horse I loved and rode all the time.. I had to leave him and recently he got really hurt and now he is bucking so there is no one to ride him because my friend at my level is scared of him.. ANd since I am gone they are just ignoring him.. ANd my instructor had a horse that she rescued an old race horse and she had recovered her and before I left promised to let me ride her if not then then when I came back in a year.. And they fired my instructor over something stupid.. Hunnie there is another person from canada.. River of tears says they are from canada too. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
yea Canada!!! haha we are so much better.. oops that damn ego of mine well Great poem, nice flow to it and very sentimental...hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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River Of Tears Junior Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 25Canada! |
Yeah, I am CANADIAN, and no worrys Hunnie, my ego is pretty big too :P Thanks again guys. |
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hollygal Junior Member
since 2006-12-30
Posts 21Alberta, Canada |
I'm canadian too!! I loved your poem, and can definitely believe in your message. sometimes a horse can do everything for you that a person can't. It also seems to be a reasonably unique viewpoint to be using. keep it up! |
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whitelielovely Member
since 2006-12-11
Posts 146Australia |
and hunnie thought she was the only canadian, hahah now you guys match our amazing aussie numbers! lol "Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Haha We do match the Aussie # but I don't want to match I want to outnumber and belive me one day we will *gives an evil laugh* haha just kidding you Aussies aren't that bad:P hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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