That image in your Countenance

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Teen Poetry #8

That image in your Countenance

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

0 posted 2007-01-02 02:05 PM

I almost see who I once was so long before
Young and free not knowing what was in store
Now I’m bloody and hurting with real pain
This time there’s no one to pin to all the blame

It was me, yes- I killed all I wanted for myself
My fault, my try, to right the things back to health
I feel so stupid, how could I have ever thought . . .
I wanted so much- but it was all that you’re not

I feel so ashamed- I look down so I don’t see
That all the while you have been staring at me
I look up- the hurt must be on my sad sorry face
Compassion radiates in your wonderful countenance

So you are more than I thought you were
Kind and caring I see, you are it- I’m sure

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-01-03 10:02 PM

good write.loved it when you used the word 'countenance' awesome write.

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

2 posted 2007-01-04 04:45 PM

you make me smile pen

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

hollygal
Junior Member

since 2006-12-30

Posts 21
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2007-01-06 11:16 PM

I thought this was a great poem, and well worded. good job!

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