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Teen Poetry #8

Coming Back

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-01-02 12:49 PM

Coming Back
hunnie

Coming back to this place,
lines of my childhood is where they are traced,
old memories come as quickly as before,
when my life was great and I couldn't ask for more,

I couldn't tell you how I felt I belonged here,
I felt no pain, felt no fear,
I wasn't critisized for everything I do,
if only i could tell you if only you knew,

I really do feel I can't be happy,
I feel you won't let me be me,
maybe i'll tell you one day I will,
but for the present my lips will stay still.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

1 posted 2007-01-02 12:51 PM

don't do that- makes it worse. honesty is the way to go- blutness hurts, but it hurts worse and longer to let these things go unsaid. alot of times things are the result of comunication lax.

-g'luck!

Whit

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-01-02 10:51 PM

Thanks, although I wouldn't know how to start really. well how to say it.....
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Tee
Junior Member

since 2006-12-20

Posts 26
Belgium

3 posted 2007-01-03 07:26 PM

Show him this poem hunnie

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-01-03 11:23 PM

thanks Tee, maybe I will

hunnie

wwzwlmd8
Member

since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

5 posted 2007-01-27 01:34 AM

I hope your doing ok and I've hope to see more poems from you.wwzwlmd8!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lemonraindrops
Junior Member

since 2007-01-28

Posts 19

6 posted 2007-01-30 10:14 PM

I'm liking the message! Great piece.
Much Love
Elyse

"I've got a jar of dirrr-rrt! I've got a jar of dirrr-rrt! And do you know what's IN my jar of dirt?"
-Captain Jack Sparrow(Johnny Depp)POTC2

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