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broken_smile1469
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since 2006-07-02
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0 posted 2006-12-31 12:30 PM



Blue skies surround me but all I do is cry
I don’t have a clue why I have these feelings inside
I hide them from the world, to better deceive
I try so hard if only I could believe
I’d believe in love that you would give me
But I don’t because I know where it leads
It doesn’t bring me happiness, but instead a broken heart
And I’m sick and tired of being lost and torn apart
I can’t stand the pain you put me through each day
So I’m giving up on you now it is the end
I don’t care what you say its my turn to defend
Myself in what I say, and that is goodbye
Since you don’t care about me, instead you fight
You promise me promises you  wouldn’t dare to keep
Yeah that is so terrible keeping a promise to me!
I don’t trust anyone, especially not you
And to think you had me thinking I loved you too
I never loved you and I never will
And I hope now you don’t love me still
Forget about my face my name and embrace
Just please don’t lie and just say goodbye

© Copyright 2006 Miranda Nelson - All Rights Reserved
wwzwlmd8
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since 2006-09-23
Posts 96
San Diego,CA
1 posted 2007-01-27 01:29 AM


WOW!!!!! that's all I have to say that was great and I liked I. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wwzwlmd8


icequeen
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since 2001-12-09
Posts 633
FL USA
2 posted 2007-01-29 07:05 PM


Sounds like a painful experience, but I am glad to see "its my turn to defend" ... It shows your spirit to remain true to your self and not settle for less than the respect that you deserve. Nice write Now your "broken smile" can be fixed, hmm?

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

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