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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California

0 posted 2006-12-27 04:45 PM



You are gone but I don't know why.
When I remember , I just cry.
Your absence is a hole in my heart.
It doesn't make sense, why we are apart.

I'd be doomed if I hadn't met you.
To the end you were completely true.
We shared many laughs along the way.
Cheered me up to see your smile each day.

Memories so precious,never to be erased.
Slideshow of us,imprinted too deep to ever fade.
You haven't left for your new home ,yet.
You're the sweetest girl I've ever met.

Uniquely brilliant, you are one of a kind.
Out and beyond this world , a friend.
Looking for just a friend, but an angel I find.
Friends forever,love you till the end.

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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2006-12-27 11:55 PM


I Like It hun.... It's Really good.. Temp Would of liked it too such a shame he is gone!!!....
rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
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California
2 posted 2006-12-28 12:49 PM


y is he gone?
RevengeIsMine
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3 posted 2006-12-28 05:44 PM


Email Me : A_Shadow_Of_Your_Imagination@hotmail.com

damo451
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since 2006-12-29
Posts 18
Western Australia
4 posted 2006-12-31 12:20 PM


I never knew Tempest, but I can see that he means a lot to you. I hope he comes back.

~Damo~

hunnie_girl
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5 posted 2007-01-02 12:50 PM


me too haha miss Tempest he was like my fav poet:P nice job Rhia
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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