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Teen Poetry #8

"fixed"

Eli
Junior Member

since 2006-12-23

Posts 10

0 posted 2006-12-25 06:29 AM

"Fixed"

The time spent changing
The time spent being sad
All for what a blind love?
No for a true love.

But now as it has all gone
I fell sad, depressed, lonely
But there is a glimer of hope
It is small but it is there
I have finaly caught up with it.

The once dead inside springs to life
What was once grey is now like a rainbow
She can't hurt me now I have found the light again
Her evil hold on me is broken
I realise that it wasnt me but her.

pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

1 posted 2006-12-25 08:47 PM

I really liked this poem, and it is nice to see so much new people in this forum. Nice write. Hopw to see more.

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

pip_man
Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 70
Canada

2 posted 2006-12-25 08:47 PM

I really liked this poem, and it is nice to see so much new people in this forum. Nice write. Hope to see more.

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace."
Jimi Hendrix

TheUnlabelled
New Member

since 2006-12-25

Posts 9

3 posted 2006-12-25 09:52 PM

Well Written. Emotional. Clap Clap, Good Work

[[TheUnlabelled]]

nick_lyss
Member

since 2006-08-21

Posts 88

4 posted 2007-01-03 04:50 PM

this was a good poem. hope 2 see more from you . courtney

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