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TheUnlabelled New Member
since 2006-12-25
Posts 9 |
Each day flies past a blur to me i'm sitting here waiting in the dark will you grab my hand? pull me away from the darkness? i open my eyes only to see you fading. you walk away from me leaving me alone leaving me broken forever forgotten you say you care and ask what's wrong i've learnt not to answer to smile and say "i'm fine" what am i suppose to do? am i to be lost in this darkness? Broken forever forgotten? i stand up just to realise you've pushed me to the edge i look down at the shark below if i fall, will you grab my hand? will you help me? this smile is but a disguise do you care? i want to become the fun soul once again i want you to care but i'm still here in the darkness Forever Forgotten |
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TheUnlabelled New Member
since 2006-12-25
Posts 9 |
I just wrote this poem.. it's just about having people turn their backs on you in your time of need. when you think no one is there to help you through your troubles and living life as an observer in the dark. [[TheUnlabelled]] |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Appears heartfelt... and flows nicely... Well done. MoonShadow |
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DucksCanFly Junior Member
since 2006-12-20
Posts 20 |
I like it, it has good flow and I can really relate to it. Well done  |
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Tee Junior Member
since 2006-12-20
Posts 26Belgium |
Realy love this poem. Hope your writing skills will never fade away I don't wish to be everything to everyone, but I would like to be something to someone. |
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