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baby_gurl908 Junior Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 15 |
Damn baby I can't do this no more that baby screaming in the background isn't only mine, he's yours.. You can't even look at our baby without looking at him with those eyes of disgrace... Those same eyes you have always given to me when you can't put up with me... There's a diffrence tho that there is your son and I am the woman your spose to love... I don't feel like you love me or the baby, you push me around and beat me down till I can't barely breathe... My Dad was right we should've waited till we were older and not 16 living at your sisters house... I should've waited to see if you truely loved me and just maybe we wouldn't be doing this right now... |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I'm assuming this is about you... If so... Hang in their.. I know how hard it is.. I too am 16 and at the moment things are harder than ever before.. I'm scared but i know i have to continue on for Ella... I'm a single mum and I'm battling it out.. it is very hard... But you will get through it hun.. If you ever need to talk.. just contact me.... |
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Tee Junior Member
since 2006-12-20
Posts 26Belgium |
Emotional well written poem. It angers me though, reading as how the father isn't taking the responsibility as he should. Wish the best for you & your baby. Know it isn't easy, but hang in there. One thing I would change about your poem though: 'isn't only mine, he's yours..' to 'isn't only mine, he's -also -yours..' But that's just my opinion  ps: If you ever need a listening ear for when you need one, feel free to contact me I don't wish to be everything to everyone, but I would like to be something to someone. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I really liked this. I know what you are trying to say, although i don't know how hard it is but if you ever want to talk just email me Best wishes, hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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