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Eli
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since 2006-12-23
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0 posted 2006-12-24 12:22 PM


Well i may only be young but im old enough to know what the world is coming to with how guys treat girls and its not good there are some of us that still show respect and do the right thing by them but there arent many left who do.

Guys like girls.
Girls love guys.
Guys use girls for fun.
Girls try to change and love guys.

Its not right.
Guys should be ashamed,
Of what we do.
How we treat them.

Respect, love, compasion.
These are the things,
That sould be used when with a girl.

© Copyright 2006 Eli - All Rights Reserved
nick_lyss
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since 2006-08-21
Posts 88

1 posted 2006-12-24 01:22 AM


guys treat us like were not humans. toss us round like we are ragdolls.we should be treated like were everybody else. but we arent.
                          courtney

Eli
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since 2006-12-23
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2 posted 2006-12-24 01:31 AM


I my self am a guy but i still think how a large majority of guys treat women is disgusting and sad. I just try to change things little by little.
nick_lyss
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since 2006-08-21
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3 posted 2006-12-24 01:54 AM


im glad theres one guy out there that cares about us.
TheUnlabelled
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since 2006-12-25
Posts 9

4 posted 2006-12-25 04:24 AM


finally a guy who actually realises how girls feel! Gosh..

[[TheUnlabelled]]

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
Posts 513

5 posted 2006-12-25 07:16 AM


I loved this. It was a great poem. You should be proud of what you wrote. Going in my libray.

            Merry Christmas,
                 Pen

Tee
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since 2006-12-20
Posts 26
Belgium
6 posted 2006-12-27 12:42 PM


Great message in your poem Eli.
Though it would be better if everyone showed eachother respect, no matter what sex they are

I don't wish to be everything to everyone, but I would like to be something to someone.

*Swing_Life_Away*
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since 2006-12-22
Posts 10
UK
7 posted 2006-12-27 04:29 PM


YES! personally iv never been mistreated by a guy but i do agree, well done dear fellow, well done 4 telling the world what guys really should be doing! thanks
poet.forever
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since 2006-11-08
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PA, USA
8 posted 2006-12-28 09:49 PM


yes well done indeed
Edward Grim
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Greenville, South Carolina
9 posted 2006-12-28 11:21 PM


I don't necessarily like the poem, but the topic is superb. I've always said that a woman is a mirror that God made to see Himself in. I'm glad someone shares my opinion. Cheers     Ed

And I said to the devil, "You better leave my spleen alone."

hunnie_girl
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10 posted 2006-12-30 04:27 AM


Well, i do agree that guys do mistreat girls. Some do. But there are Girls that do that to, it's not always only the guys

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

nick_lyss
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since 2006-08-21
Posts 88

11 posted 2006-12-30 09:33 PM


i agree with hunnie. there are girls that mistreat guys. but sometimes they do deserve it. but we do get mistreated alot too
whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
Posts 146
Australia
12 posted 2006-12-31 10:31 PM


it takes a ture man to admit that theres is something that men in general do wrong. and an ever better man to stand up to it and challenge it. in my religion women are treated like we were in the times of ladies and lords in public. opening doors and pushing in chairs. i don't know who you are only that this is something you believe in and i think you are amazing for thinking so.

-Whitteny

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

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