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BabyT'Breezey
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since 2006-12-15
Posts 11
USA

0 posted 2006-12-21 02:02 AM



yo this ones for anyone whos ever felt betrayed, unloved, even had there heart shattered..............

This is startin back in my younger days,
i thought he would change one of these days.......
you left when i was two...
you neva payed ya dos...
how could you.....


Cause dad...
i thought you loved me(how could you)
i thought you would help support me (how could u)
thought youd be there when i was sad (how could u)

sittin here today realizen all the lies you told me.
my mom was the one holdin me when you broke your word..
all the crap you put me thru.
'nd i am finally just sayin screw you..

Cause Dad
i thought you loved me(how could u)
thought youd help support me(how could u)
thought youd be there when i was sad(how could you)

Givin you many chances.
cause i thought youd change one of these days..
but now your just racist
look at my face, i aint jokein
i am done, ive had it wit your crap,
i didnt do anything to you

Cause Dad
i thought you loved me(how could you)
thought youd help support me(how could you)
thought youd be there when i was sad(how could you)
do this to me(how could you)

tell me what you think please!!!! Give Suggestions Please

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hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
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1 posted 2006-12-21 08:22 PM


~This is startin back in my younger days,
i thought he would change one of these days.......
you left when i was two...
you neva payed ya dos...
how could you.....~

I can easily relate to this poem, this stanza in general. very good and i hope to read more...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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