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Teen Poetry #8

Love,War, & Life

poemqueen
Junior Member

since 2006-12-06

Posts 26

0 posted 2006-12-20 04:39 PM

A butterfly emerges from its shell
The people gather around
To see the beauty no one can tell
A new life has begun

A tree grows into a form of food, shelter, and love
Two lovers carv their names above
Their loves blossoms as the tree

A symphany if formed way above
It carries souls on wings of doves
To meet their maker and find their fate

Four nearly men battle in war
Only to see death,plague, and war
The deaths they caused to haunt them for evermore

Two mothers cry in agony
To hear their sons are gon for eternity
They pleaded them not to go

poemqueen
Junior Member

since 2006-12-06

Posts 26

1 posted 2006-12-22 11:37 AM

hey no replies good ones please lol

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2006-12-22 10:53 PM

A butterfly emerges from its shell
The people gather around
To see the beauty no one can tell
A new life has begun~

this is my favorite stanza it had a good flow...

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

poemqueen
Junior Member

since 2006-12-06

Posts 26

3 posted 2006-12-22 11:50 PM

thanks

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