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DucksCanFly
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since 2006-12-20
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0 posted 2006-12-20 08:19 AM



Wanting, Wishing, Waiting…

Oh how these days drag on.
Everyday, I await your arrival with so much anticipation,
I sit alone, wanting nothing but for you to embrace me in your arms,
To spend my every hour, of every day with you.
I wish I could just break this force field that is fastened between us;
This vast space that divides us,
I just want you to be here with me now,
To touch, to kiss, to feel your skin against my own,

That day you said you loved me,
Was the best day ever,
I didn’t intend to fall for you,
But I fell in oh so very deep.
So deep that nothing anybody could say or do would change my mind,
I could have stopped the world just so I could sit and melt with you,
Clinging onto one another as if the world was at its end.
I’ve never felt a feeling as strong as this,
I feel as though I could conquer the world,
Just as long as you were there, there by my side.

I think of you day in, day out,
Wanting, wishing, waiting for that day I see you,
For us to loose ourselves in each other,
For our souls to become one,
With you, I feel no sense of fear; I feel no hatred for this world we live in,
You calm me, you make forget, you make me feel whole at last,
No matter how far apart we live our lives; I will love you forever,
“Love knows no boundaries, no distance, no fear.”
There is nothing in this world that can make our love perish, never forget that.

I am forever yours…

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*Swing_Life_Away*
Junior Member
since 2006-12-22
Posts 10
UK
1 posted 2006-12-22 04:24 PM


as slushy as this is, the metaphors and things are so... into it! like when you say 'to sit and melt with u' wow! im guessing its about a guy from somewhere not near you? or that you have moved away from him/her? its really good duck xxx
Tee
Junior Member
since 2006-12-20
Posts 26
Belgium
2 posted 2006-12-22 07:22 PM


Like this one alot. Can relate to it in every way... a special girl from a few years ago,now just a memory in my head, locked away.

I don't wish to be everything to everyone, but I would like to be something to someone.

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