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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2006-12-19 11:11 PM


The Window
hunnie

There's children playing in the sun,
laughing, joking having fun,
and there is rain on cloudy days,
we're singing songs to make it go away,

There's the birds flying high,
out from the clouds into the blue sky,
the drops cleansed away out stains,
a rainbow comes out like everytime it rains,

The morning sun, sets on the hill,
the dew on the ground keeps the world still,
it's hours before we all awake,
dreaming of hope a new day will make.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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whitelielovely
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since 2006-12-11
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1 posted 2006-12-21 09:10 PM


the rhythem nees some attention. i like the part about the children

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

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