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Teen Poetry #8

Taking the blame

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2006-12-19 11:10 PM

Taking the blame
hunnie

I know that I blamed you,
for everything that I went through,
but i was too bent up to take the blame,
and deep inside I know you felt the same,

So you took every bit of my accusing,
and soon it was your trust I was losing,
you stood still when I gave you the third degree,
but now I know I can finally see,

...It wasn't you, it was all me

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BabyT'Breezey
Junior Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 11
USA

1 posted 2006-12-20 12:53 PM

Ur Poem Has Good Emotion...i like the Poem Cause i Can Relate to it.

whitelielovely
Member

since 2006-12-11

Posts 146
Australia

2 posted 2006-12-21 09:08 PM

humm- it's very honest

"Love is when you tell a guy you like his shirt, then he wears it
everyday."

Noelle - age 7

Tee
Junior Member

since 2006-12-20

Posts 26
Belgium

3 posted 2006-12-22 02:09 PM

Very honest poem idd, but dont take all the blame on you hunnie, since it takes two

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2006-12-22 10:41 PM

Thanks Breezy, Lovely and Tee for your replies.

hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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