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Teen Poetry #8

What a Friend...

BabyT'Breezey
Junior Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 11
USA

0 posted 2006-12-17 01:03 AM

We had a little fight a while back..
We talked it out and were back to new,
but just a few minutes ago,
i found out somethings,
that makes me think the words you say arent true,
thought you were my best friend,
thought i could trust in you,
it seem that i was wrong,
ima try and be strong and stick things out,
but without a dout i think that things between us are on thin ice
unless you fess up now and start tellin the truth,
and just like you say on your stupid page,
just be real not fake,

all these lies that are goin thru my head,
me doutin you, wantin to scream and cry,
cause thru it all i told you my deepest secrets,
and i thought you were the sweetest friend i had,
but i guess now im on my own again
not trustin anyone or anything,
just tryin to grow up and do things my way,
aint tryin to say our friendship is thru,
but i dont think ill ever trust in you,
like i used to.
im sorry bout this note im sendin,
but i gotta say what inside,
cause i dont want to loose a friend like you.

nick_lyss
Member

since 2006-08-21

Posts 88

1 posted 2006-12-18 08:47 PM

hey.this poem reminds me of me and my friend having fights but we always manage to stay friends. maybe you should talk to ur friend and see what you can do to become or stay friends. if i was u i would talk to my friend

BabyT'Breezey
Junior Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 11
USA

2 posted 2006-12-20 12:42 PM

Thank U For Your Advice I really Apperciate it!!!

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