"Love is the irresistible desire to be irresistibly desired."
Mark Twain

Well… I guess what I mostly saw in this poem was a cynical narrative of the surrounding area/people, it could just be from the way I read it if that’s not what you were intending… I like it though; it shows an emotion I feel at times yet am hard put to describe, almost like, angry amusement?

Suggestions would be that you used a spell check of some kind before you post your poems; it gives your poem a more polished feel when everything looks neat and tidy. I think that in some places the poem could be deemed confusing in the way you’ve worded some of your lines. Reading your poem allowed to yourself a couple of times helps pick out some of these things.

Last but not least… I haven’t seen you on piptalk before, of course I haven’t been around a lot but, Welcome to passions a little late from me!~ Nice seeing a new face with new poems, again. I’ll be looking forward to reading some more of your poems in the near future!

"I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino            @-->---